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雅思小作文速成秘诀:A类—柱状图类

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摘要: 开篇的首句话可以是一句高度概括性的 introduction(当然开门见山地直接描述也是一种写法)这样做不仅使文章更于完美,而且可以达到凑字数的目的(但不要照抄题目,因为这样不会给分!)
阅卷考官经常是不会看那些图表的,因此文章必须逻辑清晰,如果描述得能令人在脑海里画出那个 data chart,这篇Task1无疑会达到8分的水平。
 
开篇的首句话可以是一句高度概括性的 introduction(当然开门见山地直接描述也是一种写法)这样做不仅使文章更于完美,而且可以达到凑字数的目的(但不要照抄题目,因为这样不会给分!)
 
接下来另起一段开始进行描迷(根据实际情况写1-2段),这当中经常要连续使用非限定性定语从句,从而使得描述过程流畅、清晰。
 
也可再另起一段进行简短的综(并非必须)上述的任何一个步都要循依据现有data进行客观描述的原则,任何推测性或议论性的内容写得再多、再精彩不但不会加分,而且还会成为扣分的因素。
 
 

A类 图表类——柱状图类

 
 
在描述柱状图时,有时候使用的语言和曲线图类似。
 
“烤鸭”们很可能在雅思小作文图表题中遇到生词,有的是机构名、地名之类的专有名词,解决办法相当简单,用替代法。
 
如下图所示,把你不懂的 committals for trial替换为A, committals for sentence替换为B,appeals from magistrates against convicton or sentence替换为C,然后按部就班描述就行了。
 
请注意学习范文的写法。
 
范文
 
下面一片柱状图的范文示例,请大家学习。
 

雅思小作文

 
 
The bar chart above shows the number of crown court cases held in the UK from 1998 to 2002. According to the information in the graph, crown cour es typically fall into the following three categories: committals for trial committals for sentence, and appeals from magistrates against conviction or sentence
 
The number of cases recorded for committals for trial in the UK in 1998 2000, and 2002 far surpassed the number of any other crown court cases recorded. Indeed, there was a steady increase in committal for trial cases reaching just over 120,000 in 2002 which was around 20,000 up on. 2000 gures and 40,000 more than was recorded in 1998
 
If we look at the number of crown court cases in the UK for committals for sentence, we can see a steady growth in numbers within the four-year phase from around 10,000 to approximately 18,000. Most notably, in accordance with the data in the chart, the growth in British crown court cases for appeals from magistrates against conviction or sentence has all but doubled in number from around 19,000 to nearly 38,000 in the same time period
 
【提示】在完成这项写作任务时,记住你不一定要面面俱到( cover every detail)
 
一般情况下,需要考生选择高或者低的数据去比较描述。
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