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摘要: 剑桥雅思8作文范文Test2Task2
剑桥雅思8作文范文Test2Task2

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名师点题剑桥雅思8作文
 
题目分析,包括写作中需要涉及的要点以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理 解。
1.罗列正反双方的论点并不是必需的,但是,一篇好作文至少要提及反方观点。
2.相互交流并没有界定,因此,考生可以根据自己的喜好,选择有相互作用的例子(例如,个人和工作方面)。
3. 多数考生会谈论电脑与网络,但是,鉴于题目没有界定科技一词,因此其它有趣的例子 亦可选为谈论话题。
 
建议的回答结构,对比此结构与考生有可能采用的不恰当结构这篇作文需要一个简短介绍和简要的结论。正文应有两到三个段落,每段阐述一个要点。 建议考生单独写一个段落来阐述与题目意见相反的观点,或者考生在正文各段中提及相反 的观点。考生应该注意,不能把这篇作文写成完全同意或者完全反对题目说法的文章。
 
名师点题剑桥雅思8作文
 
两篇观点不同的参考范文(250字—300字) 参考范文 1——不同意题目的说法
In this essay, I shall say why I believe technology has had largely negative effects on the way people interact with each other.
 
The main technology that people use to create relationships nowadays is the Internet. This can be used in a variety of ways, notably by joining social networking sites or dating sites. It often seems that such websites encourage people to form friendships based on little information and on information which may not be true. For example, a website might recommend that two people become friends on the basis of the fact that they both like a particular film. The suggestion is that the people both like this film, therefore they both like the same films generally and/or have the same interests. If the information provided by website users is false (for example gender or age), a face-to-face friendship is very unlikely and the‘friendship’ is likely to remain online only.
 
I think that television has also affected the types of relationships people make, by dramatising certain types of relationships (for example on soap operas), and suggesting that these are the ones that are important in the real world and/or that these are the relationships people should copy.
Some people seem to think that they must make their lives as dramatic as those depicted on television, otherwise their lives will be dull. The constant need for drama can certainly have an effect on a person’s relationships with others.
 
To conclude, I think that technology has provided people with new ways to form relationships, but that the results have usually been negative, particularly compared to face- to-face communication and relationship creation.
(271 words)
 
在这篇文章里,我会说明为什么我认为科技对人们的相互交流起着巨大的负面影响。
 
现今,人们用以建立人际关系的主要技术方式是通过因特网。因特网的用途体现在多方 面,特别反映在社交网站和相亲网站。类似网站却常常看似是鼓励人们在知之甚少,甚至虚 假的个人信息的情况下去交友。例如,一个网站会依据双方都是某一特定电影的粉丝这一事 实,就建议两个人交友。这种建议是因为两人都喜欢这部电影,进而就说他们都喜欢同一类 别的电影,或者有相同的兴趣爱好。一旦网站使用者提供的个人信息是错误的(比如性别、年 龄),那么他们就不可能见面成为朋友,这种“友情”仅存在于网络上。
 
我认为电视也对人们建立起的关系产生影响,它夸大了特定类型的人际关系(例如电视 连续剧),并且表示这种关系在现实世界中非常重要,或者表示这种关系是人们应该去学习模仿的。
 
好像有些人认为他们一定要让自己的生活像电视剧里演的那样夸张,不然生活就会乏 味无趣。戏剧化的需求必定会对一个人与他人的关系产生影响。
 
总而言之,我认为,科技给人们提供了建立人际关系的新方式,但结果却通常是反面的, 尤其是与面对面交流建立人际关系的方式相比。
  
名师点题剑桥雅思8作文

参考范文 2——同意题目的说法
I think that technology has largely affected types of relationships between people in a positive way and shall outline my reasons in this essay.
 
Most importantly, in my opinion, technology has enabled people to stay in contact with each other more closely. People can use the Internet and mobile phones to speak to each other and send information to each other. Moreover, this information can be in the form of pictures or videos. Thus, even if people are far from each other, they can feel close. In the modern world, where people often live and work or study in different places – even different countries – to those where their family members are, this is very important to people. In this way, technology helps people to maintain existing relationships.
 
Secondly, technology has allowed people to become friends with others who they would normally not be able to make friends with. In the past, people might have had pen friends in other countries, but now, thanks to social networking websites, people can easily connect with those who have similar interests. It is true that these relationships might not be very strong, but they can develop if the friends use them as the basis for forming closer friendships, for example if they visit each others’ countries. The fact that most of the relationships created on social networking sites are not strong does not mean that such sites are worthless.
 
In conclusion, I am generally positive about the effects technology has had on relationships of different types, because it helps people to make friends and to maintain relationships.
(263 words)
 
我认为科技对人与人之间的人际关系起着很大的积极的影响,我会在下文阐释我的理 由。
 
最重要的一点,我认为科技使人们相互之间交流更密切。通过因特网和手机,人们能够 彼此通话,彼此传递信息。此外,信息的形式可以是图片,可以是影像。因此,即使彼此远隔 千里,仍会近距离的感知彼此。在当今社会,人们一般在不同的地方居住,工作或学习,甚至 是在不同的国家,对于那些家庭成员相隔千里的人,科技对他们来说很重要。就此而言,科技 能帮助人们维护现有的人际关系。
 
其次,科技使人们有机会与通常情况下交不到的朋友建立友谊。过去,人们可能会与其 他国家的人做笔友,而现在,多亏了社交网站,人们很容易就能联系到与自己有相似兴趣爱好 的人。确实,这种关系可能不会很稳固,但是朋友可以以此为基础,发展为更亲密的友谊,比 如说互访彼此的国家。在社交网站上建立的大部分人际关系确实不稳固,但这并不能说明这 样的网站一文不值。
 
综上所述,我认为科技对不同类型的人际关系起着积极作用,因为它能帮助人们交到朋 友并维系友谊。
 
名师点题剑桥雅思8作文
 
参考范文中的词汇及结构分析,以及考生可能犯的错误。
1. 在介绍部分,作者用了“largely negative”和“largely affected”,这表明文中有反方的观点。
2.  第一篇作文正文第一段展示的是,作者如何将一项已经改变人们交流方式的科技变成了 一个特例。这段以说明相互交流可能建立不起人际关系作结。
3.  作者使用“suggest”和“seem”这样的词语来表明他 / 她所表达的观点,而并非确切的 事实。
4.  第二篇作文正文第一段讨论一般情况下的科技,还提及了特殊场合下的科技。文章提到 科技能维护人际关系,而不仅仅是建立新的人际关系。并将其与正文第二段作比。
5.  第二篇作文正文第二段最后一句提到了反方观点,并与之进行了辩驳。
 

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