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名师点题剑桥雅思8作文:
 
题目分析,包括写作中需要涉及的要点以及考生可能对题目产生的错误理解。
 
1. 导致体重增加的两个主要原因清晰明了,与食物和运动有关。切忌在一些特殊的、只影 响少数人群的医疗条件方面花费太多时间。
 
2. 可描述多种解决办法。力求描述现实性的、适合大多数人的解决办法。描述时要具体, 换言之,切忌仅仅表达说政府应该做些什么。
 
建议的回答结构,对比此结构与考生有可能采用的不恰当结构。
 
这篇作文需要一个简短介绍和简要的结论。正文应有两个或五个段落,三个或四个更好。 简单的格式是一段描述原因,然后列举两个或三个解决办法(各自成段)。有些作者会关注 反方观点、存在问题或解决办法。
 
考生应该注意不要认为一种办法对每个人都适用。
 
名师点题剑桥雅思8作文:
 
两篇观点不同的参考范文(250字—300字) 参考范文 1
 
Some countries are experiencing a situation where their citizens are becoming heavier and also less fit and healthy. The causes of this are clear, but there are many possible solutions. I shall look at the causes and a couple of possible solutions in this essay.
 
In almost all cases, the causes of increased weight are diet and/or lack of exercise. If a person eats more calories than they use, they gain weight. If they do not exercise enough, this weight gain will be fat and too much fat causes health problems. The solutions, therefore, are simple enough – convince people to consume fewer calories and/or exercise more.
 
This is easier said than done. Nowadays, more and more people have access to more and more food. Many people prefer food that is high in calories – perhaps because they think it tastes better or perhaps because it is faster or more convenient. One way of getting them to eat fewer calories might be to show them tastier dishes quickly prepared using lower calorie
 
Another solution is to get people to exercise more, so that eating more calories is less of a problem. This could be done by making keeping fit less costly and easier to participate in. Financing sports and exercise facilities could be costly, but there could be long term savings if people are healthier as a result. If neighbourhoods had sports and exercise facilities, people would be able to use them more often.
 
In conclusion, there are two main causes of weight increase and there are several possible solutions to this and to declining levels of health and fitness.
(269 words)
 
一些国家存在着一种状况,市民变得越来越重,越来越不强壮,越来越不健康。虽然导致 这一状况的原因很显著,但是解决这个问题也有许多可行的解决办法。在这篇文章中,我会 谈到相关原因和一些可行的解决办法,
在几乎所有的事例中,导致体重增长的原因是饮食习惯或是缺乏运动。如果有人吸收的 卡路里超过支出,其体重就会增加。如果没有足量的运动,增加的重量就会转化为脂肪,而过 量的脂肪就会导致健康问题。因此,解决办法简单明了——说服人们减少摄入卡路里,多运动。
 
说起来容易做起来却难。现今,有更多的人能品尝到多种美食。很多人喜欢高卡路里的 食物——或许因为他们觉得其味道更好,或许因为其更快捷或更方便。一种使得他们吸收少 量卡路里的方法,大概要告诉他们较美味的食物是将低卡路里的食物速成得来的。
 
另外一种办法是让人们多运动,这样吸收较多的卡路里就不成问题了。通过降低健身费 用和广泛普及体育设施可以促使人们多运动。投资运动和健身设施可能会耗费财力,但是假 如其结果会使人们更健康,就会变成一种长期储备了。如果社区备有运动和健身设施,人们 就能更经常地使用了。
 
总的来说,导致体重增加有两个主要原因。为此,文中提出几个可行的解决办法,应对日 益减退的健康水平。
 
名师点题剑桥雅思8作文:
 
参考范文 2
 
In this essay, I shall look at why the average weight of people in some countries is increasing at the same time that their health and fitness is decreasing.
 
The reasons why people increase in weight are well known – higher calorie intake and less exercise. In turn, these factors cause people to become less fit and healthy. People may be eating more because they have more high-calorie food available. Less exercise may be due to the increased use of cars and less participation in sports and exercise activities. Whatever the reasons, many countries where the average weight of citizens is increasing are looking for solutions.
 
Some nutritionists have suggested that processed foods are particularly likely to cause people to gain weight. To encourage people to eat less of this kind of food, perhaps the government could increase tax on it. This should encourage people to eat cheaper, healthier alternatives. This kind of thing is already done in most countries with two other things that are considered unhealthy – tobacco and alcohol.
 
Another possibility is to have a campaign to get people to exercise more. It may be possible to use famous people and various forms of media to do this – the Internet, television, radio, billboards and flyers. The idea is that if people are given more information about healthy lifestyles, they will be more likely to take notice and follow the suggestions.
 
To summarise, the causes of this problem are clear. The possible solutions to declining levels of health and fitness are numerous and depend on decision-makers.
(256 words)
 
在这篇文章中,我会谈到为什么一些国家的人均体重在上涨,而与此同时,他们的健康水 平在下降。
 
人们体重增加的原因众所周知——高卡路里的摄入和缺乏运动。反过来,这些因素导致 人们越来越不强壮、越来越不健康。人们食量大增是因为他们能品尝到更多高卡路里的食物。 缺乏运动则是因为汽车的普及和不进行运动和户外活动。不管原因如何,存在人均体重增加 情况的许多国家都在寻找解决办法。
 
一些营养学家建议加工食品很可能会导致人们体重增加。为督促人们少食用这种食物, 或许政府可以增加征税。这会督促人们选择更便宜,却更健康的替代品食用。大多数国家已 经这样施行了,另外还包括其他一些被认为不健康的东西——烟和酒在内。
 
另外一种方法是发起一场运动,号召人们多进行体育锻炼,这可以利用知名人士以及各 种形式的媒体——因特网、电视、广播、广告牌和传单等进行宣传。如果人们了解更多有关健 康生活方式的信息,他们就极有可能提起注意,照着建议去做。
 
总而言之,导致这种问题的原因显而易见。针对健康水平下降的可行措施不胜枚举,取 决于决策制定者如何选择。
 
名师点题剑桥雅思8作文:
 
参考范文中的词汇及结构分析,以及考生可能犯的错误。
 
1. 注意在第一篇作文介绍部分中现在进行时的使用,这表示的是一种现在正在进行的状态。 “becoming”一词体现的是一种变化。
 
2. 两篇作文都在正文第一段概括了体重增加以及健康水平下降的两个主要原因。注意“less” 和“more”的使用。基础较弱的考生可能会用词不当,对词汇拿捏得不够准确,表达成 “人们一点都不运动”或者“人们只吃高卡路里的食物”(两者在实际生活中都是不太可能的)。所以考生尽量不要用一些过于绝对的词。
 
3. 第一位作者使用了“This is easier said than done”。这句话短小精悍,表达了一个非常明
确的意思。
 
4. 注意两篇作文都运用了简单的对比性语言——lower, easier, healthier, cheaper, fewer,
tastier, more convenient, less costly。
 
5. 在第一篇作文的正文第三段,我们看到作者对短期花费和长期受益进行了对比,这经常是找出社会问题的解决方法的关键所在。
 
6. 在第二篇作文中,与烟酒的比较说明了这种想法合情合理并能取得成功。选择恰当的对比物可能会很困难,但如果对照鲜明就会达到很好的效果。
 
7. 第二篇作文提出了一场媒体运动的建议,注意作者提到了一些具体广告方案。
 
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